Friday, January 27, 2012

Descriptive Writing

Write a descriptive paragraph about your favorite place, person, or object.  You may choose anything you want to write a description about, but remember that when you write descriptively you must appeal to the senses.  Ask yourself what will they see, touch, hear, smell, or taste?  Not all senses have to apply, but you should consider them all and include those that would be a part of the description.

Remember, sign your name and happy blogging!

26 comments:

Anonymous said...

One of my favorite objects in my house, is my stuffed teddy bear. His name is Bear-Bear. I got him the day I was born, when my uncle gave him to me. I named him when was little. Bear Bear was one of the first things I said. Bear Bear is blue. He has many rips and tears from being loved. He has two big rips down his belly, that look like icicles. He also has a couple rips around his mouth that make it look like he had a beard. He is soft, but not plush. He has stuffing in him, that is light, fluffy and cottony. I bring him as many places as I can. He smells of home, and love. Sometimes he smells like fresh pine scent, but when he's beeen in heat for a long time, then he starts to smell more like a real bear. We pretend he's real, and play cards with him, and Apples to Apples, but we always make their moves, and have them win. His fur is very soft all around him, but his nose is hard. I like to cuddle him in the night. My aunt once made me a pair of pajamas with a sewed on picture of him, with button eyes. My grandma is making him a shirt, to cover his rips. I take him on all of our family vacations. I bring him to school. He's been to DisneyWorld, SeaWorld, Silver Dollar City, school, the gas station, restaurants, shops, Jefferson City, Lake of the Ozarks. He's like a travel buddy. It would be hard to tell you what he tastes like, because I don't normally knaw on him. He doesn't make any sounds unless I pretend to say what I think he would say. He likes to hang out with my sock monkies, sometimes. We even made trading cards with him in different outfits, or doing different professions and jobs. Bear Bear is one of my favorite companions.


Nick Shutts
#23 Jan. 28, 2012

Anonymous said...

My favorite place in the world is in the mall. Hey I know i'm not the guy that says "oh my god that is so pretty!" My favorite person is Jamaal Charles because he inspired me to play football. I always wanted to watch him play this season, he got injured and coundn't play for the whole season! My favorite object is a toy car bacause of its rough and bumpy touch. I love to pull it back and move it across the smooth wood on the floor. Oh yay going back to the mall thing the only reason when I like shopping is shopping for my self.
odai#2

Anonymous said...

My favorite people are in a band called Mindless Behavior the people in the band are Prodigy,Princeton,Ray Ray,and Roc Royal. I like them because any gender or age group can relate to there songs and they are age appropriate for younger kids. I've been to there scream tour concert and they really show that they try hard and they are great influence's for people around the world. Some things you might won't to know some things about them is they took a hole year to make one album with ten songs and an encouraging intro that makes people feel googd inside because of the touching words they used to exspress what they felt about there fans and how thankful they were for them. Mindless behavior is my favorite band because they show there exspression through there amazing voices and they never give up they encourrage people that any thing is possible sense they came from not being famous to being teenage pop stars.

Anonymous said...

Ragan #6

Anonymous said...

vanita 1\30\12

my favorite person is my mom.My mom is always there for me in sickness and health.She is also there for me when i am excited,cring,or even when im mean to her she tries to calm me down and make me less angry.I know that no matter what my mom will be with me a hundread percent.I love my mother and she loves me and that is the way it will be.My mother is important to me because she helps me get through tough situations.When something is wrong she will be there to tell me every thing will be alright.Everyones mother is important to them biologicly or not.

Anonymous said...

One of my favorite person is...well I have a lot of people who I like I love my family of coarse, but my hero is WWE Superstar John Cena.The reason why I like John Cena is because I wanna grow up to be like him.I also like him because he is my favorite wrestler.Every Monday night my dad and I watch Monday Night Raw.John Cena is on Monday Night Raw every week.For 6 years I have always wanted to go to a WWE event at the Sprint Center.Finally I get to go today (1/30/12).My dad talks to me about how wrestling is fake but I tune him out so I can continue watching Raw.Cena started in 2002.Back then he was called Triple X Crusher.When he was Triple X Crusher he was a rapper and was a "heel".A heel is a wrestler who acts mean in the arena.My dad didn't like Cena in 2002.I have always liked Cena even if he is a heel.This is my story of "My Favorite Person,Place,Or Object."


1/30/12 IAN CRONK!!!!! #8

Anonymous said...

Scottie Pippin inspired me to play basketball.well actually my dad did but Scottie kept me playing. I know that he does not play any more but I watch videos of him and theirs my play style. Like I said he retired so derrick Rose, Kevin Durant, Tim Duncan and, Dwight Howard. What is cool is that Derrick Rose and Scottie Pippin play on the same team the, Chicago Bulls. Pippin played in the 80's and 90's while Rose played modern. Auggie.

Anonymous said...

One of my favorite objects in my house, is my Xbox360. Because I love to play video games for a resen. You give me a really cool games right when you give to me I will be done with them in a oh I don't know an hour per each game maybe its because I know how to beat games. Well I can beat a lot of games but not batman or GTO games or Skyrim I can beat those games but. There is one problem I cant beat them in a hour it will take me about a month because they just keep going.(just keep going,just keep going,just keep going just like that.)Now lets get to the main part my real thing that I love at my house is my cats all of my cats they are so soft and so cute and fluffy they feal so soft so soft you can use all of them for a blaket and they be the softest blaket in the whole world. But what ever you DO DO NOT LICK THEM THEY TAST LIKE CAT LITTER well I dont really know what cat litter tast like because I dont eat it(just thinking about it gives me the chills ewww :9 no not man that sounds good face :c thats better.)for breakfest because that would be very wierd and Im not wierd but lets go back to the cats one of them if you have a bad cat you will know why I named him this his name is bababa "Badboy" pritty much when I call for him when he not down stair to eat I do the hole "badboy badboy what chu going to do when they come for you" and what do you know hes here and my cats sound like the cutest thing in the world but the one that sound the cutest is Duches or so called LG for little girl well we dont call her LG we call her little girl and she is still a kitten and she is so cute so cute that I miss her now ;) Gabriel Miller

Anonymous said...

My favorit baceball player is albert pohols. He has tied up with histry before. he is my repleca I look up to him. I like baceball and when evre I play it I try to be him. He inspires me becuse I wached him play since I was small. and he reminds me of home. derrick

Anonymous said...

One of my favorite places is Washington DC. When I go to Washington DC I usally take a book or camera and sit and read because it is very, very quiet and when I have my camera I just take lots of pictures. Sometimes I just go and admire whats around me because there is so much to see but so little time. One of my faavorite monuments is the Karien War Monument. It is special to me because that is the war my grandpa fought in. It is of soildiers walking through the mine fields and when you really look it feels like you are in the mine fields too. I also really like the Lincoln Memorial because I like to sit and look at the reflecting pool. Each time I go there it is so peaceful and that is why Washington DC is my favorite place to go.
Ellie

Anonymous said...

I'd say my favorite place to be is the mall not to by enything or shop.becouse its bussy and congested.it smells of ice cream and pizza from the food court.I also like it becouse you see so many interesting objects.you can meet new people.i love how the mall is bright and big.i just love the mall but i cant quite put my finger on why i love it so mutch. natalie #21

Anonymous said...

My favorite thing is my dolpin mood neclace. My uncle gave it to me when he went to Florida. I know that it maybe not as useable any more to wear,but it's like a somthing you can look at it and feel that someone who really cares about you. Something just little as a jelwey can mean something big in your life.
Jennie:)

Anonymous said...

My Favorite Place To Eat Is Pizza Street Because My Favorite Part Is when i get to eat desert then icecream.when im done eating pizza i get to eat what ever for desert.my favorite thing to do is cook with my mom but anything.i dont like to do homework because it is boring but I have to because its important and its my responsiblilty to learn and to return it on time. I hate cochroachs because from the outside of the body looks nasty because they crawl everywhere. When you step on it gooey stuff comes out!
Lesly #12

Anonymous said...

My favorite thing is cat because he cleans the floor of food so I don't have to,not only that but he is really fun to play with when he's not making me bleed.Sometimes my cat gets attacked by another unknown cat,so he often has cuts or bite marks on him.He's black with a white stomach and the tip of his tail is white to.He is soft but not very fluffy.He has a strange meow,he streches it so it sounds like he's groaning. That is my catand his characteristics.

Anonymous said...

My favorite place would have to be my bed. I really don't know why. it might be because of all of my loving stuffed animals just waiting for me to play with them. They are so nice and playfull. My bed used to be my cousins coltons bed, his birthday was yesterday.Than it went to my grandmas house and now I have it. it is soft and puffy and, well i don't know how to describe it. But belive me imagine yourself getting in my bed, with the electric blanket on 5. Then with my coconut bliss scented pillow, you fall asleep in 10 minutes, at the max.


-Jacob

Anonymous said...

My favorite place is Ely, Minnesota because it’s a small town. It doesn’t have as much noise as Kansas City. My family stays in a cabin at a resort on a lake. We have a boat that we use to go onto the lake. The lake always has loons on them. You can hear their call all day long. My mom’s entire family comes which is 13 people. Last year, we had to stay in a bigger cabin. I stayed in a room with my cousin and my brother. There is a little beach where I play in the sand with my cousins. The water is always freezing. It makes me shiver. The sand is so hot that I run back from the sand to the water and back to the sand. Our family hikes in the woods, especially to the Kawishiwi Falls. It smells like pine trees, but then you can smell the water. You can hear the water splashing down on the rocks. It’s so loud that you have to shout to each other to be heard. The only bad thing is all the mosquitoes. You have to constantly have bug spray, otherwise in the morning, you’re skin feels itchy. One of my favorite traditions is to roast s’mores over a campfire. They taste gooey and smell delicious! Even though I only go for a week every year, it feels like a second home. I’ve gone almost every year of my life. Ely, MN is calm and removed from the hustle and bustle of everyday life in the city. It removes the worries from my mind.

Elizabeth #7

Anonymous said...

My favorit place is legend.It smells like a park.It looks nice.It is a loud place.It has many shops.I thinks it's a nice.I think YOU YAY YOU!

Anonymous said...

My favorite person is my mom.She is my favorite person because she is always there for me.And there's just something sbout her voice that makes me feel good inside.She is just so gentle and it makes me feel so good inside.



Marla Hughes#13

Anonymous said...

should go Nick #15

Anonymous said...

One of my favroite toys is my car. I call him spy car becasue his tires don't skeek and when I put him away he is hard to find.He is metal and his tires are bounce.I got him when I was little.He is smooth and cold.spy car is awsome. Michael

Anonymous said...

My favorite place is my home because i can do whatever i want to do.I like to be at my apartment cause i can do anything and eat anything and i can sleep any time.I can paly out side how many mnite I want but in school they lemit recess.When i eat i can eat how many snaks i want but in school I have to pay.I can sleep when i want to ssleep but at school i have to work.I lke to be there because i got to say bye to my mom and dad befor they go you work.-Laolyeen Alfons

Anonymous said...

My favorite thing is a blancet that my gramother made me.It's soft and warm.She made it for me when I was born.It's pink and blue with holes.It smell like my house.My brother has one like it.I had it in the hosbidle.It's in most of my baby pictures.When I was little I wouldn't go eany where if out it.That's why I like it.KENNA SNIPES

Anonymous said...

My favorite person is my littlest brother, Corey. He is kind to me most of the time whell... more kind than my other brother. corey is always wanting me to hold him. Most of the time I do hold him but sometimes my arms are dead from holding him befor that. When he wants me to hold him he reaches his hands out for me or walks over to me.
keith #20

Anonymous said...

My favorite person in the wwe is cm punk because in 2011 he beat john cena for the wwe champoinship and cm punk won but one time a wreastler named alberto del rio won the 2011 money in the bank and at summer slam cm punk was faceing john cena for the title again.And cm punk won the title again.Then kevin nash did a power bomb on cm punk after the match .then alberto del rio came out and cashed in his money in the bank and now alberto del rio is now the wwe champion.Then it came up to T.L.C.It was TLC triple threat match and cm punk won the wwe champion again for the second time. And now it is now 2012 and cm punk is still the wwe champion.And thats why cm punk is the wwe champion and thats why he cm punk is my favorite wreastler.The end.

Anonymous said...

My favorite place would have to be North Kansas City Community Center. Because there are lots of things to do like basketball, ping pong, swimming, and other things. It is a good place because it gives you exercise.
Telesa

رامز said...

شركة درة البيت
شركة تسليك مجاري في دبي
شركة تسليك مجاري في عجمان
شركة تسليك مجاري بالشارقة