Use your Storyworks maganize from October to recall the story, "Nobody's Perfect". In this week's blog you will pretend your are either Mia or Paolo. Write a one-paragraph (6-7 sentence) journal entry recalling and reflecting on the events at the party. What happened at the party? How did you feel? What would you change next time? What would you keep the same?
Remember, journal entries include a date and also remember to sign your name!!
26 comments:
Today is the day of my party, and I just can't wait till Stacy and the other girls I invited to the party will come. Ireally hope Paolo dosen't come because he will just ruin everything then. I was so nervous when.... the door bell rang I ran over hope and feeeling inside that it was Stacy and the girls. When I opened the door it was Paolo I droped my shoulders and said "Oh", with a frown. After a while the girls didn't show I started to feel invisable. I ran up to my room with tears when Paolo came up to comfort me I started to relize who my true friends where. When I got down stairs to get my gifts. From Paolo I got a shirt that said Pobodys Nerfect. Now I know who my true friends are.
ragan
October 31,2011
Today is the day of my party and I am so excited. I can not wait until Stacy and the other girls come. I hope they will even come though I don't have that superstar stage that they want. I also hope Paaolo dose not come, he will ruin everything and make Stacy and the other girls very much dislike me. When the doorbell rang I ran to the door only to find Paolo standing at the door. Man was I dissapionted. After a little while the girls did not show up and I lost hope that they ever would. Paolo wants me to open his present now, so I do and I get a shirt that says "Pobody's Nerfect". At first I think it's the worst present ever then I relize that Paolo gave this to me because he's my true friend, not Stacy and the other girls. From now on I hang with Paolo and his friends.
Ellie
Nick Shutts November 1, 2011
Dear Journal,
My birthday party was what I thought would be horrible but turned out to be good because I made a new friend. I'd invited some popular girls to my birthday party, but after a while they didn't show up. I had also invited Paolo but hoped he wouldn't show up for some reason. I heard the doorbell ring and though that it would be the girls, but it turned out to be Paolo. I wanted to cry. But he'd gotten me a shirt that had said Pobodys Nerfect. Now I knew my true friends. I felt very dissapointed and naseous at the beginning of the party. But at the end I felt so good I had made a real friend. If I change anything it would be that I hadn't invited the girls so that I wouldn't of been so sad and rude to Paolo at the beginning of the party. But I would DEFINITELY keep that Paolo came the same. He helped me when I really needed it.
Sincerely,
Mia
November 1, 2011 odai
Dear Journal,
I feel bad that Poalo was the only one that came to my party. But he was kind enough to come.Any way I feel that who your real friends are the people that care about you. Like Mia knew that Paolo was her real friend because he came to her party. And Mia knew that her friends are not the people that you copy. Your friends is the people that like the way you are. Even if you have one friend its ok because no popular or even the perfect person in the world. You are who you are and thats all your friends need to see in you.
Sincerely,
Mia
Logan
Today is Mia's birthday party it is going to be cool I just got home from practice.Unfortinitly Mia doesn't want me there for some reason She thinks im going to ruin her party.One she hates me two her friends Stacey and the girls are going to be there.Well its been a long time and belive it or not the girls are not here.Well Mia threw a tantrum so I went to her room and knocked on her door.I asked her if she wanted to eat some cake and whack a pinata. She said yes we had fun.
Ian
I can't wait it's finally my birthday Stacy and the girls are comeing to the party.I hope Paolo dosen't come he will ruin the party.When I heard the doorbell ring I hoped it was the girls.When I opened the door it was...Paolo."Oh it's you".I ran upstairs with tears in my eyes.Paolo came up to comfort me.I just realized that Paolo is a real friend.So we went downstairs to open gifts Paolo gave me a shirt that said Nobody's Perfect.Now i know who my true friends are.
Sincerely,
Mia
11/1/11 Man today I felt so bad. Mia didn't invte me to her party. Was it because it I'm weird or she had a lot of friends there already. I came to Mia's party. I was the only one to be there. I think she was upset of me. But I said, "Come down I have a present. I gave her a Shirt called pobody's nerfect. Mia liked it. Later she went to be to the table with me! Mia didn't sit with Stacy's group. She'd wore my shirt but it was inside out like mine. Paola(Jennie)
Laolyeen-Today is my biggest party ever and i invated stacy and the grop. Paolo hard about it and i know that he coming to my party and i hope that stacy and the grop comes.Me and my mom is setting up the party my dad is makeing food and puch for the party.Mom party star at 7:30 i said. ok siad my mom.It 7:29 mia said my dad ok daddy mia said.theres was a knock on the door i open it.It was paolo hey mia said paolo mia gave him a look so what you doing here ash mia.I can for the PARTY! said paolo.Later that night me and paolol waiting for stacy and the grop and none of them came so me and paolo stared the party with out them.Paolo gave me a prasent it was a shirt that say pobodys nerfect thank you said mia for coming and giveing me this shirt.Know i no that you are my real friend are. :)
Jacob: Today is my birthday party, I can't wait untill stacy and the others come. I did not invite paolo because all he does is make trouble. I hate that guy, I want Stacy and everyone else to come but not him. I walk outside to wait i'm so nervous. I go to the door, I open it at the same time Paolo does, my heart sinks." Mia,look your friend Paolo came", said my dad. "Oh,h..hi," i say as i stumbe over my words."Come on in".once paolo comes in I run up to my room to cry, a little while later Paolo knocks on my door. " Come in", I say. Paolo comes in. " Come on Mia,lets do somthing fun". In my head i think, Why aren't I playing with my best friend. So we party a little but by the end, me and me real best friend are back together. I realized I should just have fun and not try to be popular all the time,a valuble lesson.
sincerly,
Mia
In am upset so Mia invited stacey and the girls to her party and she didn't invite me.Mia's acting funny she doesn't hang out with me anymore and shes sitting with satcey at lunch too.She Ignores me now and i dont know whats wrong or what i did wrong.I went to her haouse after practice and her dad was raeding the paper and her mom was just sitting there then Mia came outside."Didn't you invite Paolo to your party"her dad said."Oops i forgot ill go get the invatation from up stairs".She came down satirs and gave it to me but i dont really think she wanted to.Today is the day of Mia's party and i going over right now.I show up and im the onl one there "what im the only one here
sincerly,Paolo
vanita
i was so exited to get to the party.i rang the door bell mia was exited to see me.see opend the door and said oh it's you hi.she sood by the window i gues she was wiating for someone.after a while she ran up to her room i folloed her and confinced her to open her gift.she loved it i new she wdould love it.november,21,2011 p dog(natalie).
Palol doesn't come.How can I have the perfect all-girl party with Paolo here? Downstairs,Mami and Papa sit at the kitchen table,wearing pointy party hats,like they did when I was little.I pace, not wearing a pointy party hat,and wonder if my friends would will arrive separately or in a group. yusuf
10/2/11
paolo are you coming to my party?,I said. Yes I am,paolo said. I wish he did not come tomorrow,I tought. We went to the mall. I got a fortune teller thingy. I set it up when we got home. Nick M.
11/3/11,Today is horrible,Mia did not invite me to her party.I know that she wouldn't mind if I came.So I went.I made a slingshot andshot noodles at Mia.She ran upstairs and cryed.I went to check on her.We went down stsirs.Weate some very yummy cake.Then we smashed the pinata.Finally I gave her my gift.It was a black shirt that said,POBODS'S NERFECT.She loved it.
Auggie^
November 3,2011 Dear journal, yesterday was my party it was fun. But Stacy and the other girls didn't come.I also wish I had Supper Star Stage though.Paolo came and we had fun. We played forchen teller.My mom made a good cake. LOVE, MIA P.S.there was a pinaota.
TODAY is my birthday i cant wait till my freinds come but i hope paloe doesnt come or my friends will not enjoye the party.I was scared nervouse and i heard the door nock i opend the door but i was hoping it was my friends but it wasnt it was paloe and i was hoping it was my friends so i just went upstairs to my room and i didnt know who was my true friend was.When paloe talked to me i felt better and i toatlly knew who my true friends were.Anyways i hade a great birthday party and i got a perfect shirt from paloe and it was prety.lesly#12
November 4, 2011,
Dear Miss Journal,
I thought the party would be cool with the fortune teller, but I didn't know if the girls would like it without Star Stage. I only invited Paolo to be nice to him when he came over. He was the only one who came. I felt bad at first because he's a boy, and I really wanted my friends to come. However, after I calmed down, I had a good time. If I could do it over, I wouldn't have invited the girls because they didn't seem very interested in coming. They probably would not have liked Mama's rice cakes or Papa's homemade pinata. Paolo understood how I felt, and I like the "Pobody's Nerfect" t-shirt he gave me. It was really sweet of him.
At the beginning of the party, I felt disappointed because it was only Paolo. By the end, I felt awesome.
Mia (a.k.a. Elizabeth)
I would be poalo and i would invite the peopple that i know would come i would keep the pineata the same derrick
Dear Journal, November 4,2011 Today Mia had a party and invited lots of her friends but none of them came.I felt really sorry for her so I decided to give her the present I bought now.It was a brown shirt that said,"Pobody's Nerfect".She really liked it and she said that she took back what she said about me ruining everything.I think she finally realized that you don't need friends to have fun.But Mia is still mad at Stacy and the other girls.And so after that we all busted open the pinata and we had so much fun. Paolo (Joseph)
May 5,2011 "Oh,my gosh.Today is the day of my awesome b-day party!This is is the best day of my life,Mom."or so I thought.It actully turned out to be the WORST day of my life.I'm so mad at Stacy!She WAS nice but now she's mean and I don't want to see her on Friday,that's how mad I am.She better say she's sorry.I even herd her saying that I have no taste in cloths.I f there's anyone who has "no taste in cloths",it's Stacy.I'm actully glad paolo came to my party.He helped me see that he is my true friend. Sincerly, Mia - Marla#13
Today is the day of my party, I just can't wait till Stacy and the other girls that I invited to the party get here.I really hope Paolo dosen't come and I really hope he didn't invite eney of his friends
now the partys just about to start really paolo is the only one here atlest he got me a present what do you know it said Pobody's nerfect atlest its somthing
{Gabriel miller #16}
I think that this means that peopel are trieing to be better then outher people.people Think that thay now everythang becaues thay might have a brother or a sister that thay tried to be cool at school.I think that nobodys perfct means that every one in unit states of ameacia in thay aced better then outher people.Telesa Banks
Today was the day of my party.My stomech was in a knot.I was setting up the fourchen teller stuff.And suddtly there was a knok at the door.I said"I will get it"very loud I got the door all ecsitied I opened the door and it was paolo.At first I did not what paolo to come.But after a while I reaized who my true friends are.
Sinserly Mia
Michael
Dear Journal,
Today is my b-day! OMG! This is going to be the best birthday ever!
Dong....Dong. the door bell rang. I dashed to the door hopeing that Paolo isnt there. With exitment I open the door. Hey! ow? Paolo? Hi.
I run to my room and throw away the fortion teller kit. I sink into my bed. paolo comes and chesks on me. I go back up stairs with him and take turns hiting the pinyata until it breaks. I would take out the part where she crys and add a part where she learns who her real frinds are.
Sincerley Mia
Keith #20
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